Tuesday 20 September 2011

Storyboard idea

Alice has already blogged our ideas for the storyboard and has left the ending open. This is what we have:

-Male and female break up
-female becomes intoxicated whilst out partying
- male is worried and constantly calling
-female suffers with depression amongst other personal issues
-female stumbles home one night (or day) after a partying, potraying a prostitutes life syle and appearance
-she takes off her leather jacket and boots; looks at her phone ringing and chucks it on the floor
-she gets in the bath fully clothed wearing a white thin under dress
-make up and body filthy and dirty; bloodied and scratched and bruised
-male keeps calling from his own flat
-female reaches out picks up her phone then drops it in the bath
-male notices that the phone has stopped ringing
-in the males flat you see all the photo frames with pictures of the couple
-he gets up and leaves (slow motion) hes running through alley ways and dark streets
-shes feeling weaker and weaker, she has consumed drugs
-she lights a cigarette and smoke hovers around her
-the bath water is muggy and dark
-a ladybird crawls along the rim of the bath
-he is running up to her house
-she drops the cigarette in the bath (she is dying)
-hes is running up her stairs
-her head is slowly going further and further down the side of the bath reaching the water
-suddenly her head is completely under
-he reaches the landing and opens the door
-he races forward and lifts her out

I think the ending should have some closure similar to the lyrics, and he should be holding her head out of the bath even though he knows hes too late and she has died. The night sky can be viewed from the bathroom window and the stars begin to go out of focus and the light slowly disapears.

"Watching you drown
I'll follow you down
And I am here right beside you
The lights in the sky
Are waving goodbye
I am staying right beside you"

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